This assignment gave me the chance to practice writing a character sketch by focusing on a person, an object, a setting and a specific moment in time. While writing it, I realized how much sensory details help bring a scene to life and make it more interesting for the reader. I also learned how important it is to show instead of tell in descriptive writing because a person’s actions, expressions and small details can say much more about them than just directly explaining who they are.
Jodi Whitt, friend, 42, a locket, Sunday evening
She was dressed in tailored slacks and a crisp white shirt, and her stride conveyed confidence and authority. Her smile radiated warmth, making everyone feel welcomed and safe.
Her laughter was unrestrained and boisterous, and the subtle aroma of her favorite perfume drifted as she tossed her hair, a fragrance that lingered, reminiscent of a cherished memory and leaving a lasting impression.
As she raised her mug, the steam spiraled upward, carrying an inviting aroma that filled the air; she closed her eyes for a moment, letting the rich scent envelop her senses while she absorbed every detail of the conversation around her.
Lost in contemplation, the shifting light gleamed across her necklace as she nervously twirled the locket between her fingers, a small, silver token linked to cherished memories. The anticipation built, for soon she would step forward to deliver her speech.
Approximately 50 people attended the event, and the grant funding depended on her presentation, which concentrated on higher education opportunities for women involved with the justice system.
Although she had delivered numerous speeches previously, she still experienced apprehension. Her desire to excel made presenting before an audience a source of continued nervousness.
“It’s like I’ve done this a hundred times but speaking in front of a crowd just doesn’t get any easier.” she said.
Sonja M. West 